On the verge of taking his own life, a detective will have to get back on his feet to investigate the disappearance of his neglected daughter

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kpetrakis01 · Samurai · 705 pts

What if he had been fired from his job, so no resources? Did the kidnapper send him a personal message - ie is her disappearance his fault from an old case? How old is his daughter?? Why is he suicidal - failed job, failed marriage? I think this can work with just more detail.

 

A washed up divorced detective is forced into retirement until he discovers his estranged 15 year old daughter is missing and the police have no clues.? Maybe? Needs a greater obstacle I think...

Emma6767 · Penpusher · 110 pts

Focus on finding the daughter because I guess that it is the main action in the film