Categories: Drama
Almost killed, a young black Caribbean girl wants to attend college so she trades her ghetto neighborhood to live in a pristine suburb in America.
Almost killed in the concrete jungle that raised her, a young black Caribbean girl sees college as a way out, so she moves to suburbia America as an illegal immigrant.
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1. Almost killed by whom?
(and if she moves somewhere else it becomes her history which has no place in your logline)
2. "To want to attend college" isn't a goal
3. Her trading ghetto life is an event,
But with no implied conflict
Now her "moving to America as an illegal immigrant" is an interesting situation...
Personally i liked the direction we were headed in your previous thread.
Especially Richiev's take..
When she moves with her stepdad in California, a spirited Caribbean runaway uses her homespun common sense and street-smarts to overcome the prejudice and stereotype she receives from an unwelcoming neighborhood.
A journey to fit in...
This format has scope in endless directions
Remember Tokyo Drift? It's the only film I was interested--plotwise--in the FNF franchise
