Swashbuckling adventure of Alan as he breaks out of jails and leads a wandering lifestyle until he meets the love of his life which changes his life and leads him to be a detective.
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Consider a more focused approach, who is he and why is Alan swashbuckling? What world is he in that swashbucklers become detectives? "love of his life, which changes his life" is a bit clunky. You might consider more vibrant language when describing the love of his life. Maybe consider presenting a conflict, as an example - the love of his life is also the same person trying to put him back jail.