A bacheior must race against time to stop his apartment being invaded from a pair of talking cats.

by IvyEight6 · Showrunner · 1,840 pts July 10, 2020 13 views

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Revenge of the Cats

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Scott Danzig · Showrunner · 1,585 pts July 11, 2020

"Must race against time to" confuses me, because I have no idea what the rush is... I'd rather see "must stop talking cats from invading his home". Also, is there anything that sets this concern off? "After a bachelor heats up a particularly aromatic TV dinner, a hungry bachelor must stop his apartment from being invaded by a pair of talking cats." Would watch!

IvyEight6 · Showrunner · 1,840 pts July 10, 2020

It's revised.

Former member · 114,968 pts July 10, 2020

The logline sets up a situation for a plot. But it doesn't deliver a plot. See the guidelines under "The Formula" at the top of the web page for guidelines on how to formulate a logline so that it includes a plot.

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