When a good-for-nothing architect after a divorce is rejected by his 6 year-old son, he signs up for a competition to create the towns new playground and win back his sons respect.

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I changed it a bit thanks to the good advice I was given.

6 reviews

Sonja · Logliner · 370 pts

Love it, and love the previous feedback, just have to be "like that" and say that here loser would be with one o, otherwise it takes on a different meaning :)

Piotr · Penpusher · 35 pts

that's cool - a great drama in intimate scale, this concept defines "success" very originally and challenges our, as an audience, expectation that it must be money/career/prestige; I read here a promise of a wise, intelligent and entertaining movie with ironic twists. I'm in ;)

Korvtraktor · Penpusher · 65 pts

Like the father-son relationship. Maybe have the father before the son in the logline as he is the main character. "When a looser architect gets divorced and his son turns on him, he must win a competion to create the towns new playground in order to win back the respect of his son.