When a pregnant woman goes missing, her hospital phobic boyfriend must escape a doomed abortion clinic before she succumbs to its long forgotten curse.

Update - As I've continued with the story, I have found that even though all the elements mentioned in the logline are still there, this logline doesn't suit the story AT ALL.

Just an observation.

Expect something new very soon...

Cool, glad to help

I've been tinkering now for the last 9 hours over this logline and have come to the conclusion that the difference between mine and your alteration comes down to a matter of personal perspective, so we're both right for different reasons.

However, I would probably change "end its curse" to "break its curse", just so it looks like the main guy HAS to achieve something rather than how it looks now and having something just "happen".

All in all, thanks for your advice, but from this point forward I think I'm ready for the next step and if anything needs to change after that, I have your suggestions.