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It does make it more personal, hey. I thought saying scorch the earth, that there is a bigger picture... but in saying that, a mans family is his future...thanks filmstar! Will revise the new one...
sure, I just mean 'scorches the earth' isn't personal - cause everyone will die right ? if the devil's army revenge is personal to the hero / lover - maybe it should be stated ? Dunno, just spouting ideas.
Great story :)
going for the R18+ are we? lol There is a back story that they demon killed the janitors parents, making him an orphan. Also his fiance is pregnant and he doesn't know it til ACT 3. I think Its personal enough, cheers :)
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