When a young but tough stranger arrives in an isolated community, the naive queen must protect him from the suspicious villagers. But has she made the right decision?

by Himiona · Initiate · 55 pts March 7, 2019 207 views

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Himiona · Initiate · 55 pts March 8, 2019

Yes good point

Richiev · Oracle · 58,825 pts March 8, 2019

Your logline seems to switch perspectives. It starts with the strangers PoV, then it switches to the queen PoV.
It is better to have the same PoV throughout the logline.

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