When an explorer’s ancient necklace is stolen, she must retrieve it before it is used for evil.

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Short film idea. Thinking similar to the beginning of Indiana Jones and the recent Tomb Raider film.?

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Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts ★ Accepted

Your logline is short enough you could add a few details to flesh out the story in the reader's mind:

 

When her ancient necklace (That can control the weather) is stolen by an evil (Witchdoctor) an intrepid explorer with a knack for trouble must get the artifact back, before it's used to (wreak havoc on the world)

MitchW · Logliner · 445 pts

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When her ancient necklace, which is also the key to a witch's tomb, is stolen by a descendant of the witch, an inexperienced explorer must retrieve the necklace before the evil is released.

MitchW · Logliner · 445 pts

Updated Logline:

When her ancient necklace, which is also the key to a tomb full of horrors, is stolen by a descendant of the corpse, a spry young explorer must retrieve the necklace before the evil is released.