When her reclusive father dies without a will, his washed-up rodeo queen daughter must gather her estranged siblings in order to settle his estate.
Categories: Drama
Categories: Drama
It's still not clear what specifically they need to do. What is their goal and what will their main action be?
"...they have one shot of avoiding foreclosure," - what does this mean in practical terms?
Also, "...changing their dubious reputations..." is vague and seems redundant to the plot - you can simply cut it.
Maybe this one drills down a bit more:
I like it. What about this:
When a former rodeo queen and her ex-con?brother inherit their father's struggling farm, they have one?chance to make it a success, ?and one to?turn around their failed lives.