When new clues from the diary of her long lost brother, help a young woman to solve a riddle of decades old crime, she is compelled to go to Siberia in search for her vanished family and a missing treasure.

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Corridor One

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hospas · Penpusher · 230 pts

This logline does not reveal any conflict, inner or outer. Is there an antagonist or something she must fight against.

Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Corridorone.

From the posts above it seams that each iteration of the logline is getting a number of consistent comments. I suggest implementing these notes as they mostly still apply to the latest draft of the logline.

rkeller · Penpusher · 95 pts

Perhaps tighten a bit?

After a daughter uncovers her dead brother's diary, she scrambles from Brazil to Siberia searching for her family and her birthright fortune.