When they discover the complications of moving in with two romantic partners, a thrill-seeking bartender must decide whether polyamory is for them, or risk losing both of their loves.

by James Walker · Logliner · 120 pts June 25, 2024 11 views

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Is the event too vague? I get that the POV character discovering something is an event, but they’re discovering a concept, idk.

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cmarch29 · Initiate · 80 pts July 12, 2024

Dating in New York, eh? Logline is little long. You can get ride of "When they," right off the bat. Active voice -- "Discovering the complications of living with two romantic partners, a thrill-seeking bartender..." I understand the pronoun usage, but I am curious if it will be absorbed by someone reading it quick or be seen as a grammatical mistake. If you choose to tinker around, you can stil effectively write this without pronoun usage.

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