Which one logline should I work on: Multiple Personality Malfunction, Boy becomes king, the youngest known president, girl vs gods, woman revenge for loss of her people, or volatile guy saves city? I leave it to you. P.S. The Train Demon Script is almost done, so until this is figured out, I’ll be working on that logline to get it ready. Thank you and i appreciate the help.

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Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

I like the idea of your 'Goliath' story, but you need to find a way to get rid of the unit's guns.
I mean, if a sling and a stone can kill a giant, then so can a .45

However, if you can figure that out. (Maybe the modern military unit enters a world where technology doesn't work) Then that would be a good one to work on as well.

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts
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"When she accidentally releases the god of death while excavating a newly discovered Egyptian pyramid, an archeology student must hunt down the lost dagger of Amon Ra if she's to stop the angry deity and save humanity from being sucked into the underworld."

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