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  1. Posted: June 11, 2017In: Thriller

    Rework: When cops are killed in a series of murders, the investigator must catch the contract killer and his employer before they get to his family.

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    Added an answer on June 12, 2017 at 2:38 am

    OOOOOH I really like the idea of this story! With that being said, maybe a word other than "cops" can be used to make this seem more realistic. Also, perhaps an adjective for the investigator? Other than those two points, this seems like a solid log line. I would really like to read this script or sRead more

    OOOOOH I really like the idea of this story! With that being said, maybe a word other than “cops” can be used to make this seem more realistic. Also, perhaps an adjective for the investigator? Other than those two points, this seems like a solid log line. I would really like to read this script or see the production!

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