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  1. Posted: May 27, 2013In: Public

    On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

    7ama_Harris
    Added an answer on March 8, 2015 at 2:38 pm

    EdgeWriter is right although maybe add that the person on the run finds out that the street enforcer is related to him/her and feels sympathetic??, let's himself get captures to avoid death to the enforcer. Not sure but hope this helps

    EdgeWriter is right although maybe add that the person on the run finds out that the street enforcer is related to him/her and feels sympathetic??, let’s himself get captures to avoid death to the enforcer.
    Not sure but hope this helps

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  2. Posted: December 13, 2014In: Public

    In a city where gangs rule the streets and fight each other for food, water, shelter, guns & ammo, and territory. On the outskirts of the city is where utopias of no crime is around, but for how long? These gangsters have been treated like nothing by these politicians, who dump caviar and gold like nothing, they control the police departments, government, and the people. A group of close friends met a police officer who knew how to drive the politicians out of power, but they first had to stop their own city from tearing itself apart.

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    Added an answer on March 8, 2015 at 1:14 am

    Sounds fucking amazing except I'm still unsure as Who the main character is and what prompted the main character to go through such effort to take the politicians out of power and after they are out of power (if they are) wouldn't that just cause chaotic behaviour from the terririorial gangs just doRead more

    Sounds fucking amazing except I’m still unsure as Who the main character is and what prompted the main character to go through such effort to take the politicians out of power and after they are out of power (if they are) wouldn’t that just cause chaotic behaviour from the terririorial gangs just doing the exact same thing but on the outskirts of the city, unless they fuse into one big gang in the first place but that would just seem set-up and fake, perhaps just make the main character be the one who gets the politician out of power? But to do so he has to sacrifice his group and the sympathetic police officer?

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  3. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    Clashing husband-and-wife inventors of a new process to design life-saving drugs need to settle their differences in time to fight off a global corporation using espionage tactics to bury an invention that will save millions of lives.

    7ama_Harris
    Added an answer on March 8, 2015 at 12:50 am

    maybe if you include that their child has got infected and that's what prompted them to do it, and would have to put aside their differences by the pressure to save everyone including their child??

    maybe if you include that their child has got infected and that’s what prompted them to do it, and would have to put aside their differences by the pressure to save everyone including their child??

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