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  1. Posted: February 23, 2015In: Public

    A drug addicted rich kid breaks into an unsuspecting college students parents home who is home from college due to a just diagnoses of severe diabetic. The situation takes a turn for the worse as a hot shot negotiator tries to prove himself rather than save the girl, who falls into diabetic shock slowly as the hostage taker battles withdraw symptoms. The ending of this terrible situation is tragic and carries swift punishment, no one will ever be the same.

    Adam Griem
    Added an answer on February 23, 2015 at 3:40 pm

    Um... Drug addicted rich kid. Girl is more symbolic, hence death in end. How to make protagonist more clear...ideas?

    Um… Drug addicted rich kid. Girl is more symbolic, hence death in end. How to make protagonist more clear…ideas?

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  2. Posted: February 23, 2015In: Public

    A drug addicted rich kid breaks into an unsuspecting college students parents home who is home from college due to a just diagnoses of severe diabetic. The situation takes a turn for the worse as a hot shot negotiator tries to prove himself rather than save the girl, who falls into diabetic shock slowly as the hostage taker battles withdraw symptoms. The ending of this terrible situation is tragic and carries swift punishment, no one will ever be the same.

    Adam Griem
    Added an answer on February 23, 2015 at 3:40 pm

    Um... Drug addicted rich kid. Girl is more symbolic, hence death in end. How to make protagonist more clear...ideas?

    Um… Drug addicted rich kid. Girl is more symbolic, hence death in end. How to make protagonist more clear…ideas?

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  3. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    When a mass murder shuts down production on an Arctic oil rig, an ambitious young oil exec is charged with managing the crisis only to be thrust into a battle for survival as an ancient fungus co-opts the first responders turning them into violent spore spreading rapists.

    Adam Griem
    Added an answer on February 23, 2015 at 3:36 pm

    To be honest when I read that first line about a mass murder shutting down the Arctic oil rig the fungus part turned me off. When I clicked on the logline I just had the impression it might be a cool survival story. Not to downplay the fungus. That is really interesting. I'm not sure of the genre. WRead more

    To be honest when I read that first line about a mass murder shutting down the Arctic oil rig the fungus part turned me off. When I clicked on the logline I just had the impression it might be a cool survival story. Not to downplay the fungus. That is really interesting. I’m not sure of the genre. Who are we rooting for? Why do we care about their survival? I like the concept ( where did you get the idea for this???) I am jealous, which is a good sign!

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