1. Posted: May 10, 2015In:

    A superhuman woman, that is expected to be a savior of the futuristic world with no energy, needs to be saved by a looser fanboy- though not from danger outside, but rather from her self. Note: This is actually meant for comics(manga) script. Target audience is Y/A. Genre is sci-fi action/drama.

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    What do you mean by "looser"? Is he "looser" as in 'loose in the head' or "looser" as in laid back chill?

    What do you mean by “looser”? Is he “looser” as in ‘loose in the head’ or “looser” as in laid back chill?

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  2. Posted: May 11, 2015In:

    A young street level dealer must navigate the mine field of gang culture to get out before the gang implodes in a bloody internal war.

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    Why are there killings? Can't he dropout of the gang without anyone noticing?

    Why are there killings? Can’t he dropout of the gang without anyone noticing?

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  3. Posted: May 11, 2015In:

    Set in contemporary Japan, an American expatriate finds employment as a bartender at a residential hotel only to discover that it doubles as the base of operations for a major Yakuza syndicate.

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    Thanks for the feedback. Just updated now, tell me what you think.

    Thanks for the feedback. Just updated now, tell me what you think.

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