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  1. Posted: August 22, 2012In: Public

    When the son of a billionaire couple is kidnapped during their messy divorce, the ransom is an ultimatum: one parent will get to take their son home – the other must die.

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    Added an answer on August 23, 2012 at 12:43 am

    That's pretty kickass. I want to see that. It's all there. The only thing I can think of is...What do the kidnappers get out of a billionaire's dead body? I guess they could just be some real messed up people, or does it tie in with this messy divorce? I'm worried that I'm not using the reply functiRead more

    That’s pretty kickass. I want to see that.

    It’s all there. The only thing I can think of is…What do the kidnappers get out of a billionaire’s dead body? I guess they could just be some real messed up people, or does it tie in with this messy divorce?

    I’m worried that I’m not using the reply function properly as I’ve no real criticism to give here, bloody good job!

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  2. Posted: August 21, 2012In: Public

    When a nuclear war erupts on the first day of summer, a astronaut must guide a group of survivors towards safety, for the survival of humanity and his return voyage home.

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    Added an answer on August 23, 2012 at 12:35 am

    Couldn't have said it better, Harvey. I was about to say something like 'where's the antagonist?' but I believe that by describing the survivors as 'rag tag' can imply that the struggle could be between the members of the group, either against one another or against their leading astronaut. Like inRead more

    Couldn’t have said it better, Harvey.

    I was about to say something like ‘where’s the antagonist?’ but I believe that by describing the survivors as ‘rag tag’ can imply that the struggle could be between the members of the group, either against one another or against their leading astronaut. Like in the movie ‘Cube’ (one of my favourites), when the baddy turns out to be one of the gang, but not until quite a while in.

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  3. Posted: August 15, 2012In: Examples

    When young hot-shot District Attorney becomes Gotham's white knight in the wake of the Batman's assault on crime; the the mafia turn in desperation to the chaos loving 'Joker' who offers to cleanse the city of the symbols they believe in and prove that whatever doesn't kill you simply makes you… Stranger.

    aidanthedude
    Added an answer on August 23, 2012 at 12:26 am

    Tad long for a logline. Perhaps it'd work nicely as a blurb. The last part 'whatever doesn't kill simply makes you stranger' seems a little chucked in and not entirely relevant for a logline, but would work as a tagline. It's also important that you mention what's at stake for Bats, his love interesRead more

    Tad long for a logline. Perhaps it’d work nicely as a blurb.
    The last part ‘whatever doesn’t kill simply makes you stranger’ seems a little chucked in and not entirely relevant for a logline, but would work as a tagline. It’s also important that you mention what’s at stake for Bats, his love interest Rachel.

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