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A young, successful real estate entrepreneur discovers his entire life is controlled by a group of computer programmers.
Why are the computer programmers controlling his life? If you don't want to tease that point in the logline, I would at least add an adjective or two to describe the programmers. Are they evil or what?
Why are the computer programmers controlling his life? If you don’t want to tease that point in the logline, I would at least add an adjective or two to describe the programmers. Are they evil or what?
See lessAfter learning his father did not die when he was 7 a man sets off to find him, and does, at a silent monk monastery halfway across the world.
Where is the struggle and end goal for the lead character? It seems like the entire story is revealed in the logline. I would focus more on what happens AFTER the lead finds his long lost father. Clearly, the father is not the same person as before he joined the monastery. I see potential in this, aRead more
Where is the struggle and end goal for the lead character? It seems like the entire story is revealed in the logline. I would focus more on what happens AFTER the lead finds his long lost father. Clearly, the father is not the same person as before he joined the monastery. I see potential in this, as long as you’re willing to dig deep into the plot and find a way to pull the reader in.
See lessA recently deceased couple must find a way to reconcile their marriage in the afterlife before crossing over.
I agree with FFF. Though the idea is original, the logline should include some more details to make the reader want to sink their teeth into it. I would say just build upon this logline with some more action and description. For instance, how did the couple die? Is there something quirky or odd abouRead more
I agree with FFF. Though the idea is original, the logline should include some more details to make the reader want to sink their teeth into it. I would say just build upon this logline with some more action and description. For instance, how did the couple die? Is there something quirky or odd about the husband and wife?
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