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  1. Posted: April 5, 2013In: Public

    A group of psychology students get lost on their way home during a hurricane, and are forced to take shelter in a mansion occupied by psychopaths.

    Alex_212
    Added an answer on April 5, 2013 at 12:19 pm

    I have to say I found the idea behind this one amusing. I feel a slight amount of tweaking to the Log should make it an easier read and flow much better. "get lost on their way home during a hurricane", reads awkward. Maybe :- "A group of psychology students on their way home, get lost during a hurrRead more

    I have to say I found the idea behind this one amusing. I feel a slight amount of tweaking to the Log should make it an easier read and flow much better.

    “get lost on their way home during a hurricane”, reads awkward.
    Maybe :- “A group of psychology students on their way home, get lost during a hurricane and are forced to take shelter in a mansion occupied by psychopaths.”

    Hope this helps 🙂

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