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While out on a date – a young; confident; and carefree girl comes across the most addictive of aromas. She follows it like a drug only to be lead to a dead body. Now her morals are at war with her new found obsession – She's addicted to the smell of death.
Love how dark it is. I'm hooked - but I want to know more about what her strange new obsession will drive her to do. Will she start roaming the dangerous parts of the city at night, hunting for corpses? Is she tempted to become violent? Will she go to TAFE and study to be a professional embalmer? InRead more
Love how dark it is. I’m hooked – but I want to know more about what her strange new obsession will drive her to do. Will she start roaming the dangerous parts of the city at night, hunting for corpses? Is she tempted to become violent? Will she go to TAFE and study to be a professional embalmer? In terms of logline structure, feel like you need to distil it to be more succinct, and tighten the formatting. The first dash doesn’t need to be there, and you should be using commas instead of semicolons.
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