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EDITED: In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a fanatic telepath to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and plunge the world into war.
It sounds interesting. This might be tighter. In Victorian London an American spy attempts to thwart the plot of a telepathic madman before he assassinates the Queen. Not sure if American serves any purpose. Would rather see an adjective to describes her drive.
It sounds interesting. This might be tighter.
See lessIn Victorian London an American spy attempts to thwart the plot of a telepathic madman before he assassinates the Queen.
Not sure if American serves any purpose. Would rather see an adjective to describes her drive.
?An emerging artist comes to town to become an art star, but it won’t be easy for him, there he falls in love with a promising young lawyer. A car accident leaves the couple in a coma, only one can live thanks to the heart of the other, and thus be able to fulfill their dreams. ?
It sounds interesting but I'm not clear why the one with the good heart would give it up. Some options to consider: What is the inciting incident? Perhaps it can start from when the heart transplant happens Maybe have a heart donation available from a third party but only one can get it so it becomeRead more
It sounds interesting but I’m not clear why the one with the good heart would give it up.
Some options to consider:
What is the inciting incident? Perhaps it can start from when the heart transplant happens
Maybe have a heart donation available from a third party but only one can get it so it becomes a legal case. What are the stakes/consequences?
Perhaps the artist is brain dead but has his heart functioning thus donating his heart to the lawyer.
What is your theme? Where is it going?
See lessA married woman accidentally drinks a love potion and falls in love with a shy prince. Her open-hearted husband is excited for her, but the King isn’t.
Not quite sure why her husband would be OK with that. Not sure what the stakes are either. What's her journey?
Not quite sure why her husband would be OK with that. Not sure what the stakes are either. What’s her journey?
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