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Even if it's a completed story and there's no script for it yet, you can still write a logline using the format that B8C outlined for you. Perhaps something like: Major Event: His wife dies and children go missing Hero: A grieving Mexican luchador Main action: Find his children and break up the biggRead more
Even if it’s a completed story and there’s no script for it yet, you can still write a logline using the format that B8C outlined for you.
Perhaps something like:
Major Event: His wife dies and children go missing
Hero: A grieving Mexican luchador
Main action: Find his children and break up the biggest human trafficking ring in Mexico.
Example logline:
After his wife dies and his children go missing, a grieving Mexican luchador must find his children and break up the biggest human trafficking ring in Mexico.
I know there are some points missing, but just to give you an idea of how you can boil it down to its core elements.
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I agree with the other comments - I think 'honourable' is stronger than 'honest'. But I think the concept is strong - it certainly sets up both the mental and physical in the story and you can see what the arc will be for the main character, so well done.
I agree with the other comments – I think ‘honourable’ is stronger than ‘honest’. But I think the concept is strong – it certainly sets up both the mental and physical in the story and you can see what the arc will be for the main character, so well done.
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This revised version works SO much better than the previous. How old is the boy? (I'm asking more because I'm curious :))
This revised version works SO much better than the previous. How old is the boy? (I’m asking more because I’m curious :))
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