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  1. Posted: May 2, 2015In: Public

    After she finds divorce papers, a desperate make-up artist goes to extreme measures to turn herself into her husbands ideal woman, but when she discovers that he actually dreams of becoming a woman she has to face what is really keeping them together.

    allymay
    Added an answer on May 6, 2015 at 3:55 am

    I agree, I need the right word to really describe this protagonist. She was a spunky, feisty, talented woman, but the loss of her child 5 years earlier derailed her. She is still trying to hold onto some part of her baby, so she clings to this marriage. Any thoughts on one descriptive word for that.

    I agree, I need the right word to really describe this protagonist. She was a spunky, feisty, talented woman, but the loss of her child 5 years earlier derailed her. She is still trying to hold onto some part of her baby, so she clings to this marriage. Any thoughts on one descriptive word for that.

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  2. Posted: May 2, 2015In: Public

    After she finds divorce papers, a desperate make-up artist goes to extreme measures to turn herself into her husbands ideal woman, but when she discovers that he actually dreams of becoming a woman she has to face what is really keeping them together.

    allymay
    Added an answer on May 5, 2015 at 3:25 am

    Thank you all for your helpful comments. Here is a new version- When a talented but derailed makeup artist discovers divorce papers she desperately tries to save her marriage by transforming herself into her husbands ideal woman.

    Thank you all for your helpful comments.
    Here is a new version-
    When a talented but derailed makeup artist discovers divorce papers she desperately tries to save her marriage by transforming herself into her husbands ideal woman.

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  3. Posted: May 2, 2015In: Public

    Rudderless since returning from the Gulf, a sardonic veteran's hapless life gets a bump when he befriends a youth in need of a mentor, but in order to save his budding relationship with his young protege's mom he must shed his old skin and become the man everyone, including himself, needs him to be.

    allymay
    Added an answer on May 5, 2015 at 3:18 am

    Though this sounds like a great story, the logline is a bit to convoluted for me to really get a good image of the movie in my mind. I agree with the other comments, simplify as much as possible while telling us who the protagonist is, what their goal is and what the obstacle is.

    Though this sounds like a great story, the logline is a bit to convoluted for me to really get a good image of the movie in my mind. I agree with the other comments, simplify as much as possible while telling us who the protagonist is, what their goal is and what the obstacle is.

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