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When an unsettling past is brought to light between two enemy veterans, a young lady struggling to find her story in the world must reconcile the gentleman, for friendship and trust is at stake.
This logline sets up the conflict and stakes of the story pretty clearly. It tells us that there are two veteran enemies with a bad past, and a young lady who needs to make peace between them. But we don't know what the past is or why it matters, and we don't know much about the lady or what she's sRead more
This logline sets up the conflict and stakes of the story pretty clearly. It tells us that there are two veteran enemies with a bad past, and a young lady who needs to make peace between them. But we don’t know what the past is or why it matters, and we don’t know much about the lady or what she’s struggling with. Still, if the story is done well and has good characters and themes, this logline could work as an idea to build on.
See lessAn artist down on his luck sees his roommate about to use the last of the peanut butter, a great battle of hilarity and hijinks ensues where he must fight for the right to claim the nut spread as his own
The logline is straight to the point and funny. So if I got it right It's about a guy who wants his peanut butter and the hilarity that ensues as he tries to get it from his roommate. The story itself may not be super unique or exciting since it's a common comedy setup, of two characters fighting ovRead more
The logline is straight to the point and funny. So if I got it right It’s about a guy who wants his peanut butter and the hilarity that ensues as he tries to get it from his roommate. The story itself may not be super unique or exciting since it’s a common comedy setup, of two characters fighting over a limited resource. but if the execution is good and it’s meant for the right audience, it could definitely work!
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