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  1. Posted: September 8, 2015In: Public

    A Nuclear Physicist turned to iron while saving the planet from destruction is shunned and betrayed by the world he saved and now seeks his revenge.

    Andrew_east
    Added an answer on September 8, 2015 at 3:02 pm

    I read the logline anf though: "Hey, that's the Black Sabbath song", then I saw the title, ha! And I guess it's good, I liked it, very concise, then again I'm no expert.

    I read the logline anf though: “Hey, that’s the Black Sabbath song”, then I saw the title, ha!

    And I guess it’s good, I liked it, very concise, then again I’m no expert.

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  2. Posted: September 8, 2015In: Public

    A fraud investigator must go to Europe and through Siberian catacombs to find out the truth about her father who mastermind an international criminal heist

    Andrew_east
    Added an answer on September 8, 2015 at 2:59 pm

    Hi! First time reviewing loglines here: I think you could trim down the: "And trough Siberian catacombs", and instead tell us what happens if she doesn't find her father, or WHY does she need to find the truth about him.

    Hi! First time reviewing loglines here:

    I think you could trim down the: “And trough Siberian catacombs”, and instead tell us what happens if she doesn’t find her father, or WHY does she need to find the truth about him.

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