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  1. Posted: September 28, 2018In: Drama

    When her alcoholic father breaks his leg and ends up at the hospital, the 11-year old girl must find someone to stay with or she?ll be placed in foster care.

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    Added an answer on October 23, 2018 at 5:55 am

    Thanks for the great input. I'm not sure where the brother idea came from, my thought was that she asks a teacher at school whom she feels confidence for. But I agree, perhaps foster care doesn't sound too bad, the only bad thing about it is that she realizes she might not get back to her own home -Read more

    Thanks for the great input. I’m not sure where the brother idea came from, my thought was that she asks a teacher at school whom she feels confidence for. But I agree, perhaps foster care doesn’t sound too bad, the only bad thing about it is that she realizes she might not get back to her own home – ever. Because when everyone realizes how her life is…
    Yes, I do agree that foster care would be better, but if you’re 11 years old, and your experience with grown ups is that they aren’t that grown up, and that you don’t know what you’ll get… The mother died a few years back.
    I’ll ponder and get back to you guys with another logline for this. I just posted another idea though.

    Again, I’m grateful for all the really good feedback :-). You pose good questions.

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  2. Posted: September 23, 2018In: Horror

    When clues from his friend’s disappearance lead to a high-class restaurant, an old hobo must save him from becoming part of the menu.

    Anette Logliner
    Added an answer on September 23, 2018 at 8:27 am

    Perhaps give the hobo a handicap such as being mentally unstable? A little unpredictable...

    Perhaps give the hobo a handicap such as being mentally unstable? A little unpredictable…

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  3. Posted: September 21, 2018In: Student Loglines

    REVISED: When her beloved grandma passes away, an estranged young woman must find a way of fulfilling her grandma?s last wish while struggling to reconnect with her dysfunctional family at the funeral.

    Anette Logliner
    Added an answer on September 21, 2018 at 7:40 pm

    Sounds too much like?Death at a Funeral ?(2007). ?Make sure it's not.

    Sounds too much like?Death at a Funeral ?(2007). ?Make sure it’s not.

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