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  1. Posted: September 20, 2018In: Comedy

    An incessant granny is kidnapped by two dim-witted crooks and used to hold her wealthy son to ransom. When her son refuses to pay she must forge her own escape and find the reason why.

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    Added an answer on September 21, 2018 at 9:54 am

    Sounds a bit too much like "Ruthless people" ?(1986), only with a granny instead of a wife. Try and find a way to make it a bit more different from the other film.

    Sounds a bit too much like “Ruthless people” ?(1986), only with a granny instead of a wife. Try and find a way to make it a bit more different from the other film.

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  2. Posted: September 19, 2018In: Western

    When a Native American curse raises the dead to descend on a sleepy frontier town, a penitent gunslinger, sentenced to hang, seeks redemption by leading the townsfolk in their desperate fight for survival.

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    Added an answer on September 19, 2018 at 10:59 pm

    Good plot, but I'd love to get a hint of the emotions of the gunslinger. Why does he even want to save the town if he is going to hang anyways? Is this a chance for escape for him? Also, I think you can cut a little, the untried lawmen and townsfolk becomes the inexperienced townsfolk.

    Good plot, but I’d love to get a hint of the emotions of the gunslinger. Why does he even want to save the town if he is going to hang anyways? Is this a chance for escape for him? Also, I think you can cut a little, the untried lawmen and townsfolk becomes the inexperienced townsfolk.

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  3. Posted: September 17, 2018In: Romance

    A shy researcher in an isolated science station falls in love with the voice of his Russian counterpart, when he doesn’t hear from her for 24 hours he sets out across the tundra to find her.

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    Added an answer on September 18, 2018 at 6:30 am

    I like it, but I would like a more credible explanation of how he could be the only one in the universe with the medicine. A bit far-fetched? Or make it clear how he is the only one having this medicine. What sort of illness is it and why would the cure only be in his hands.

    I like it, but I would like a more credible explanation of how he could be the only one in the universe with the medicine. A bit far-fetched? Or make it clear how he is the only one having this medicine. What sort of illness is it and why would the cure only be in his hands.

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