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In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on a rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.
I guess my hook is for the people hearing the logline to ask why. To hint that there is a reason that the famous star crossed female lover suddenly wants revenge but not say it would allow the listener to imagine and only find out what it is by watching the film. I kinda want to play on the premiseRead more
I guess my hook is for the people hearing the logline to ask why. To hint that there is a reason that the famous star crossed female lover suddenly wants revenge but not say it would allow the listener to imagine and only find out what it is by watching the film. I kinda want to play on the premise that everyone is so familiar with the story and have it flipped there fore have people guess without giving it away. If I add more, I believe it would give it away. So knowing this should I still say why she wants revenge?
I’m sorry for being bullheaded. I do think you make a valid point as to adding the stakes.
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Problem is Nir Shelter, it's not a comedy. The screenplay is more of a plain ol' action with a dash of deep Shakespearean thinking.
Problem is Nir Shelter, it’s not a comedy. The screenplay is more of a plain ol’ action with a dash of deep Shakespearean thinking.
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So this is I guess what you could call a second draft: In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on revenge fueled rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.
So this is I guess what you could call a second draft: In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on revenge fueled rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.
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