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A retired homicide detective must figure out why everybody below the age of 65 have died at their computers, which are all running a pointless game where avatars are stalked and killed by a monster. To make matters worse there’s nobody left to run the nursing home, food is running out, and Mrs Everett needs to go to the bathroom.
You got a great concept there. I suggest though that you add a hint as to either why he retired too old for this shit or dramatic backstory) or hint at the connection of why the detective himself must be the one as opposed to nonretired detectives.
You got a great concept there. I suggest though that you add a hint as to either why he retired too old for this shit or dramatic backstory) or hint at the connection of why the detective himself must be the one as opposed to nonretired detectives.
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Thank you. If I wrote the script any other way, that would be perfect.
Thank you. If I wrote the script any other way, that would be perfect.
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