I really like the idea, but I haven`t seen Point Break.

Personally I`d base it in London, where jewelry theft from stores at night is prevalent, as the Police aren`t allowed to pursuit the moped scooter`s they use to get away. That and the spectacular backdrops at night, and the gritty locations.

As a filmmaker I can tell you now though, that getting the Health and Safety, plus Ethics forms passed would be near impossible. Without a massive budget for netting/airbags, stuntmen and Stunt co-ordinaters – Basically what I`m saying is make this script spectacular, I mean OMG Awesome – Or ditch it now.

Personally I`d really like to film this idea, so I wish you luck.

N.B. A ridiculed rookie cop, determines to apprehend a gang of free-running jewelry thieves, only to fall for their charismatic female leader. What goes on under the covers, doesn`t stay undercover.

I`m new here so maybe I don`t `get it` yet, but from what I`ve read this is a testing ground for potential films, pre-production.

If so I`d personally love to kill this concept now. To qoute Malcolm Tucker of In The Thick of It, another sweary man; `I`ll come over their and stick it in fucking floatation tank, and pump it full of sewage till it fucking drowns`. I paraphrase.

No decent human bieng is going to allow thier 7 yr old boy to KNOWN the C-word, nevermind rehearse it for a movie. Would you really want to watch such a thing?! I`d avoid such a puerile, immature script by miles.

You play on every clich? and lazy stereotype available, so there`s nothing remotely intriguing to make nyone bother reading. Let me guess, he chooses sex and stops swearing. So what?! He sounds like a parasite. Boohoo he was bullied, he should man up and be a parent. Urgh.

Don`t waste anymore of your life on this – stab it. Burn it. Bury it. And move on. Preferably far, far, far away.