Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
A couple stuggles to make sense of their troubled relationship as the end of the world draws closer
too general, probably you should avoid using vague phrase: to make sense? (more specific, how?), trouble relationship (what? why 'trouble'?), the end of the world draws closer (you can also be more specific here, how? what stake? the event is just huge). Keep spirit!
too general, probably you should avoid using vague phrase: to make sense? (more specific, how?), trouble relationship (what? why ‘trouble’?), the end of the world draws closer (you can also be more specific here, how? what stake? the event is just huge). Keep spirit!
See lessA young girl travels through the woods to find a cure for her fathers illness during the end of the world and the end of humanity
I agree with asamman. Great idea that the logline failed to show. here It just looks like you take part of your story as your logline, You suppose to sum up your story so we can be interested in the first place.
I agree with asamman. Great idea that the logline failed to show. here It just looks like you take part of your story as your logline, You suppose to sum up your story so we can be interested in the first place.
See less