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A shy young girl wants to tell the real cause of her a friend's death because she was always bothered by her in her dreams but she is afraid that she might be accused of being a part of the crime and so she started to stalk her suspected killer only to realize that the death was self inflicted.
It is really wordy. If it is not vital to the story you don't need it in the log line. A shy girl risks her own innocence by stalking her best friend's killer only to discover a horrifying truth.
It is really wordy. If it is not vital to the story you don’t need it in the log line. A shy girl risks her own innocence by stalking her best friend’s killer only to discover a horrifying truth.
See lessA shy young girl wants to tell the real cause of her a friend's death because she was always bothered by her in her dreams but she is afraid that she might be accused of being a part of the crime and so she started to stalk her suspected killer only to realize that the death was self inflicted.
It is really wordy. If it is not vital to the story you don't need it in the log line. A shy girl risks her own innocence by stalking her best friend's killer only to discover a horrifying truth.
It is really wordy. If it is not vital to the story you don’t need it in the log line. A shy girl risks her own innocence by stalking her best friend’s killer only to discover a horrifying truth.
See lessIn the near future, the world is falling apart. A disillusioned highway cop turns vigilante when his young family are slaughtered by a motor cycle gang who refuses to recognise the law.
Make sure to use correct grammar and spelling when you actually submit this to anyone. (I assume you meant "cop" and "vigilante" also young family IS slaughtered) You could leave out that first sentence, and incorporate it into the second. As society falls apart, a disolutioned cop turns vigilante tRead more
Make sure to use correct grammar and spelling when you actually submit this to anyone. (I assume you meant “cop” and “vigilante” also young family IS slaughtered) You could leave out that first sentence, and incorporate it into the second. As society falls apart, a disolutioned cop turns vigilante to seek revenge on the futuristic motorcycle gang that slaughtered his family.
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