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  1. Posted: August 30, 2013In: Public

    When a man travels half a state away to break his brother out of prison, his wife starts to question their relationship.

    AspiringZach
    Added an answer on August 30, 2013 at 11:06 pm

    Alright, thanks man. I will get to work on the new logline! Hopefully I'll be able to add all your points and make it compelling.

    Alright, thanks man. I will get to work on the new logline! Hopefully I’ll be able to add all your points and make it compelling.

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2013In: Public

    When a man travels half a state away to break his brother out of prison, his wife starts to question their relationship.

    AspiringZach
    Added an answer on August 30, 2013 at 2:13 pm

    No he does not miss any family function. His wife obviously doesn't want him to leave her behind and break his brother out of jail. She doesn't want this because she believes if he leaves her that he thinks his brother is more important than her, and that she doesn't want him taking part in such anRead more

    No he does not miss any family function. His wife obviously doesn’t want him to leave her behind and break his brother out of jail. She doesn’t want this because she believes if he leaves her that he thinks his brother is more important than her, and that she doesn’t want him taking part in such an illegal activity as in breaking someone out of prison.

    But as I said she questions the relationship because she’s upset over the fact that he leaves her, and that he would risk his life for his brother.

    Also his brother hasn’t been in prison long. He’s been in there for about two weeks.

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2013In: Public

    A selfless man attempts to break his brother out of prison when his relationship with his wife goes sour.

    AspiringZach
    Added an answer on August 27, 2013 at 8:40 am

    Probably the last one I post for a while. For all who have helped me on the last few loglines, thank you!

    Probably the last one I post for a while. For all who have helped me on the last few loglines, thank you!

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