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  1. Posted: January 11, 2014In: Public

    (1600’s, Action/Comedy) After losing his parents to bandits, Spaniard San?o and his servant Pan?o goes after a wild treasure hunt with the map San?o stole from the bandits.

    Ayd?n ?zer
    Added an answer on January 12, 2014 at 8:11 pm

    Thank you for the very good questions. I don't want it to be a revenge story.. So I made his father an ex-pirate who had a treasure map. Bandits locate him years later for the map. So our hero embarks on this Treasure journey after his father's death.. A part of me just wants to dump all this back sRead more

    Thank you for the very good questions.
    I don’t want it to be a revenge story.. So I made his father an ex-pirate who had a treasure map. Bandits locate him years later for the map. So our hero embarks on this Treasure journey after his father’s death..

    A part of me just wants to dump all this back story and start the film with a dude looking for treasure with a map… but than i fear we wouldnt be invested in him in an emotional level. why he is doing this,etc…

    What do you think? Should I keep all the back story of how this journey got started?

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  2. Posted: January 11, 2014In: Public

    (1600’s, Action/Comedy) After losing his parents to bandits, Spaniard San?o and his servant Pan?o goes after a wild treasure hunt with the map San?o stole from the bandits.

    Ayd?n ?zer
    Added an answer on January 12, 2014 at 7:59 pm

    Yes, I have a lot of Don Quixote in my mind... and somehow the Treasure Island wasn't. Thanks to you, now it is. Great input. Thank you. Bandits are in a hot pursuit and now I made hero's father an ex-pirate who became a farmer. Hence, he has the treasure map.

    Yes, I have a lot of Don Quixote in my mind… and somehow the Treasure Island wasn’t. Thanks to you, now it is. Great input. Thank you.

    Bandits are in a hot pursuit
    and now I made hero’s father an ex-pirate who became a farmer. Hence, he has the treasure map.

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  3. Posted: July 24, 2012In: Public

    A teenager hunts the killer of his father but falls in love with the daughter of his enemy. Can he kill the beloved father of the woman he loves?

    Ayd?n ?zer
    Added an answer on January 12, 2014 at 12:04 am

    I see this as a Southern Crime/Romance story. In the likes of "Mud" and "Monster's Ball"

    I see this as a Southern Crime/Romance story.
    In the likes of “Mud” and “Monster’s Ball”

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