1. Posted: May 3, 2012In:

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    babag123

    Thanks Karl, that's helpful. Just to clarify, when you say 'pick something else', do you mean pick a different story? Or a different title? And if the main character was the patient, would that change anything? Because then she would be motivated, with a strong desire, etc?

    Thanks Karl, that’s helpful. Just to clarify, when you say ‘pick something else’, do you mean pick a different story? Or a different title? And if the main character was the patient, would that change anything? Because then she would be motivated, with a strong desire, etc?

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  2. Posted: May 3, 2012In:

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    babag123

    Hi, Thanks so much for the feedback. To be honest I wasn't aware there were hundreds of stories like this. Obviously there's things like Fatal Attraction but ... good to know now if it's just a massive cliche. Thanks for the feedback on sentence structure too - I guess I saw it as one slip by him unRead more

    Hi,
    Thanks so much for the feedback. To be honest I wasn’t aware there were hundreds of stories like this. Obviously there’s things like Fatal Attraction but … good to know now if it’s just a massive cliche. Thanks for the feedback on sentence structure too – I guess I saw it as one slip by him unleashing this uncontrollable force that wrecks his life. But again, I hear what you’re saying about it not being original enough. Thanks again.

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