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As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. In order to uncover the true killer, he must accept the wolf? or be lost to the beast forever.
Sounds interesting. Though there's a lot of vague stuff here. "cursed detective" - specific "struggling to contain the wolf within" - vague "suspects he is being framed" - vague "framed for murder" - specific "uncover the true killer" - specific "accept the wolf...beast forever" - vague So far I'm sRead more
Sounds interesting. Though there’s a lot of vague stuff here.
“cursed detective” – specific
“struggling to contain the wolf within” – vague
“suspects he is being framed” – vague
“framed for murder” – specific
“uncover the true killer” – specific
“accept the wolf…beast forever” – vague
So far I’m seeing “A werewolf detective framed for murder must…(need something specific).
Maybe the guy murdered was a working on a werewolf antidote thingy and so the only chance of getting his hands on this cure will be to unravel the mystery of his murder blah blah blah.”
What did you have in mind?
See lessOn a dare a naive orphan tries to get aboard a legendary space ship, and back to the orphanage before dinner with a "souvenir" from the ship or the two bullies who made the dare will smash his model space ship.
Why did I think that the 'model ship' would actually (by some freak time/space warp thingy) actually be the REAL SHIP that the boy is on board? I'm not sure if a story about a couple of kids threatening to break a toy unless another kid sneaks onto a SPACESHIP is working for me. Could just be me. SeRead more
Why did I think that the ‘model ship’ would actually (by some freak time/space warp thingy) actually be the REAL SHIP that the boy is on board? I’m not sure if a story about a couple of kids threatening to break a toy unless another kid sneaks onto a SPACESHIP is working for me. Could just be me.
Seems like your STAKES (losing a toy) are completely overshadowed by the AWESOMENESS of this kid getting to sneak around a REAL spaceship! Screw the bullies, they can keep the toy, I’m on the FREAKING REAL THING!!
See lessAn egotistical vigilante who kills the countries worst child-killers becomes a media-hyped national hero but has to make a choice between 'fame' and his family…
I'm not sure about the "..." If it's important to the logline (and it seems like it was leading to the actual conflict) then my guess is it should be in the logline.
I’m not sure about the “…” If it’s important to the logline (and it seems like it was leading to the actual conflict) then my guess is it should be in the logline.
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