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  1. Posted: September 5, 2014In: Public

    After the son of Death finishes his first day in the family business, he must persuade his father that he wants to follow his dream by becoming a chef.

    Barbra Long
    Added an answer on September 8, 2014 at 6:53 am

    After Ian hears that his father could be dead, and his horrible uncle was about to take possession of the family property, he desperately needed to find his father.

    After Ian hears that his father could be dead, and his horrible uncle was about to take possession of the family property, he desperately needed to find his father.

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    The day before Christmas, an unadventurous, spoiled young boy gets kidnapped. He escapes with the help from a girl who has facts that will help him find his beloved father, but there is a price. He must first recover something that is precious to her before Christmas.

    Barbra Long
    Added an answer on September 6, 2014 at 3:54 pm

    Thanks for the helpful comments and taking the time to read my logline. REVISED:A boy's journey is to find his father's body involved in a train accident. He gets a note showing promise. He later finds himself in the dreads of London looking for a magic slipper.

    Thanks for the helpful comments and taking the time to read my logline.

    REVISED:A boy’s journey is to find his father’s body involved in a train accident. He gets a note showing promise. He later finds himself in the dreads of London looking for a magic slipper.

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  3. Posted: September 5, 2014In: Public

    The day before Christmas, an unadventurous, spoiled young boy gets kidnapped. He escapes with the help from a girl who has facts that will help him find his beloved father, but there is a price. He must first recover something that is precious to her before Christmas.

    Barbra Long
    Added an answer on September 6, 2014 at 3:54 pm

    Thanks for the helpful comments and taking the time to read my logline. REVISED:A boy's journey is to find his father's body involved in a train accident. He gets a note showing promise. He later finds himself in the dreads of London looking for a magic slipper.

    Thanks for the helpful comments and taking the time to read my logline.

    REVISED:A boy’s journey is to find his father’s body involved in a train accident. He gets a note showing promise. He later finds himself in the dreads of London looking for a magic slipper.

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