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  1. Posted: November 21, 2014In: Public

    An emotional comedy about a dying playboy in his 30s, planning to host his own funeral, who falls in love for the first time, with an engaged woman.

    barnesworld
    Added an answer on November 30, 2014 at 7:23 pm

    What about this one then guys: A dying playboy has to expose the lying fianc? of a brilliant woman so she can find true love, but falls in love with her himself.

    What about this one then guys:

    A dying playboy has to expose the lying fianc? of a brilliant woman so she can find true love, but falls in love with her himself.

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  2. Posted: November 27, 2014In: Public

    Death, the grim reaper, is fired from his job and must now do the one thing he has next to no knowledge of – get a life!

    barnesworld
    Added an answer on November 30, 2014 at 6:59 pm

    Really compelling concept Josh, I want to see this film. It sounds ace when you explain it more, but I agree with Richiev, trim the fat and add that either obstacle/ticking clock/consequence if he doesn't do it. This is such a massive set up - only one man has ever done this unique job and he's fireRead more

    Really compelling concept Josh, I want to see this film. It sounds ace when you explain it more, but I agree with Richiev, trim the fat and add that either obstacle/ticking clock/consequence if he doesn’t do it. This is such a massive set up – only one man has ever done this unique job and he’s fired. He is the GATEKEEPER between life and the next world. Perhaps if he doesn’t find a job (or meaning to his LIFE) then the guy who took his job sends him to hell? Or something like that. I think even though it’s a comedy, and obviously is, with such big themes and characters, it needs that big consequence too which dpg talks about. And if you did trim it and add that, then I think a producer would just say “how much do you need to make it?” and you’d be away. I hope that helps mate.

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  3. Posted: November 27, 2014In: Public

    Death, the grim reaper, is fired from his job and must now do the one thing he has next to no knowledge of – get a life!

    barnesworld
    Added an answer on November 30, 2014 at 6:59 pm

    Really compelling concept Josh, I want to see this film. It sounds ace when you explain it more, but I agree with Richiev, trim the fat and add that either obstacle/ticking clock/consequence if he doesn't do it. This is such a massive set up - only one man has ever done this unique job and he's fireRead more

    Really compelling concept Josh, I want to see this film. It sounds ace when you explain it more, but I agree with Richiev, trim the fat and add that either obstacle/ticking clock/consequence if he doesn’t do it. This is such a massive set up – only one man has ever done this unique job and he’s fired. He is the GATEKEEPER between life and the next world. Perhaps if he doesn’t find a job (or meaning to his LIFE) then the guy who took his job sends him to hell? Or something like that. I think even though it’s a comedy, and obviously is, with such big themes and characters, it needs that big consequence too which dpg talks about. And if you did trim it and add that, then I think a producer would just say “how much do you need to make it?” and you’d be away. I hope that helps mate.

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