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  1. Posted: June 5, 2016In: Fantasy

    A grieving 12 year old boy must navigate between his physical and fantasy worlds, battling fears and doubts to uncover the origins of a mysterious dagger. This journey will test the truths of who he is and who he is to become.

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    Added an answer on June 18, 2016 at 7:41 am

    Thanks DPG! This gives me quite a bit to chew on. Gonna give it another go and write some more variations and share when I have them ready. Thanks so much for the time to respond!

    Thanks DPG! This gives me quite a bit to chew on. Gonna give it another go and write some more variations and share when I have them ready. Thanks so much for the time to respond!

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  2. Posted: June 5, 2016In: Fantasy

    A grieving 12 year old boy must navigate between his physical and fantasy worlds, battling fears and doubts to uncover the origins of a mysterious dagger. This journey will test the truths of who he is and who he is to become.

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    Added an answer on June 16, 2016 at 11:24 pm

    So you're saying the emphasis shouldn't be on reclaiming what he had lost but what he will learn throughout the journey and that should be the goal stated in the logline, am I hearing you correctly? I appreciate this process by the way, it's helping.

    So you’re saying the emphasis shouldn’t be on reclaiming what he had lost but what he will learn throughout the journey and that should be the goal stated in the logline, am I hearing you correctly?

    I appreciate this process by the way, it’s helping.

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  3. Posted: June 5, 2016In: Fantasy

    A grieving 12 year old boy must navigate between his physical and fantasy worlds, battling fears and doubts to uncover the origins of a mysterious dagger. This journey will test the truths of who he is and who he is to become.

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    Added an answer on June 16, 2016 at 7:46 am

    Thanks DPG, some great insight. ?Actually, as 12 year old, a boy is plenty old enough to have already been exploring heroic tendencies. By 9 years old boys can start showing signs of claiming and through play learning the art of exploration and conquest. With my character he had already begun this pRead more

    Thanks DPG, some great insight. ?Actually, as 12 year old, a boy is plenty old enough to have already been exploring heroic tendencies. By 9 years old boys can start showing signs of claiming and through play learning the art of exploration and conquest. With my character he had already begun this process at the age of 10 because his brother encouraged him. However, throughout the series I did want him to move on from the past. It’s just in this pilot we are learning about the past and he does begin to remember what it means to be brave. This is part of the reclaim process. As the series continues it will no longer be about reclaiming and overcoming his brother’s death but as the quest ramps up, it will be new aspects of maturity he will be learning, even thrusted into.

    So to answer your question, yes, I believe he does have something to recover, albeit, not decades of experience, but experience he learned with help from his brother, who is now gone. But you are correct that after that process and grieving is complete he will face more in the near future.

    So the question is, does the logline need to include that aspect of the future? There’s a hint of it in the pilot but it’s subtle and most likely will not come till a few episodes down the road.

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