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  1. Posted: June 5, 2016In: Fantasy

    A grieving 12 year old boy must navigate between his physical and fantasy worlds, battling fears and doubts to uncover the origins of a mysterious dagger. This journey will test the truths of who he is and who he is to become.

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    Added an answer on June 13, 2016 at 5:50 am

    Based on the pilot of the series, how about this: "A grieving 12 year old boy must recover a lost dagger that has opened up a fantasy world in which he must journey through in the hopes of reclaiming his spirit of heroism."

    Based on the pilot of the series, how about this:

    “A grieving 12 year old boy must recover a lost dagger that has opened up a fantasy world in which he must journey through in the hopes of reclaiming his spirit of heroism.”

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  2. Posted: June 5, 2016In: Fantasy

    A grieving 12 year old boy must navigate between his physical and fantasy worlds, battling fears and doubts to uncover the origins of a mysterious dagger. This journey will test the truths of who he is and who he is to become.

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    Added an answer on June 13, 2016 at 5:43 am

    Taken from DPG?s suggestion of basing this off the pilot alone and not the series as a whole, does change things. In the pilot, the boy finds the dagger and begins to have fantasies about where the dagger came from, he is transported to another time and place. After one of the fantasies the dagger vRead more

    Taken from DPG?s suggestion of basing this off the pilot alone and not the series as a whole, does change things. In the pilot, the boy finds the dagger and begins to have fantasies about where the dagger came from, he is transported to another time and place. After one of the fantasies the dagger vanishes which is the inciting incident to find the dagger.

    His grief is over the loss of his older brother. Since his death he has lost his sense of identity, bravery, heroism in which his brother encouraged as they grew up together. Finding the origins of this dagger, the truth of the fantasies and the foes he faces in them entice him on this journey.

    Think Wonder Years meets LOST!

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  3. Posted: June 5, 2016In: Fantasy

    A grieving 12 year old boy must navigate between his physical and fantasy worlds, battling fears and doubts to uncover the origins of a mysterious dagger. This journey will test the truths of who he is and who he is to become.

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    Added an answer on June 5, 2016 at 12:00 pm

    This is a drama/fantasy scripted series if that helps.

    This is a drama/fantasy scripted series if that helps.

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