Thank you so much for all the advise. I’ve never truly considering the importance of the log line – I’m definitely get it now.

Okay, so the film starts with a girl being attacked by four guys in a forest. They make her take her clothes off and then leave her naked without physically abusing her in anyway. Our main character (Alistair) arrives to find the naked girl and helps her up – firstly to the police station to report the crime and secondly back to her college dorm.

We assume that he has simply helped the girl, but we later learn that he is part of the attackers (his job being the suave good looking night who helps the girls in distress.)

The attack is recorded and ends up on a site called Dark Video.

Dark video is a website that sells exclusive illicit videos of real people being sexually attacked (snuff films) – it operates on something like silk highway – very exclusive and security conscious.

Groups around the world are picked by Dark Video to send in footage. The only kicker for those who send in videos is that it needs to be proven with a case number, hence Alistair’s job as saviour and to make sure that the attack gets reported. Our group is based in Cape Town South Africa.

The group that Alistair works with, become more sinister. Dark video’s video requirements become more violent. Terri’s video becomes the most popular on the site and clients want it as an exclusive – building the tension that they may want to do more to her in the future.

All the while, Terri seeks solace in Alistair’s arms and their relationship and their closeness becomes a threat to everybody. Does Alistair, a vain self-serving golden boy take the easy way out or save the girl?

Any suggestions would great.

Thanks again for the help.