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On the run after robbing a bank during the great depression, two brothers find themselves trapped in the harsh region known as the Dust Bowl where a ruthless killer hunts them down.
Hi Cameron: I believe that one of the brothers is the protagonist and you may want to define this, and him, so you can write from his POV. I love the idea of being in the Dust Bowl it is an area I have never heard of and will be interesting on screen and remember to treat it as an antagonist. The 'rRead more
Hi Cameron: I believe that one of the brothers is the protagonist and you may want to define this, and him, so you can write from his POV. I love the idea of being in the Dust Bowl it is an area I have never heard of and will be interesting on screen and remember to treat it as an antagonist. The ‘ruthless killer’ doesn’t seem to fit as he is not in the set up and you may be better using a term such as a ruthless bounty hunter/sheriff. Good luck!
See lessWhen a rival Japanese company steals all their employees, a reckless wannabe street-racer must help his mother save their failing ojek business. (An ojek is a motorcycle based form of public transport; like a motorcycle taxi. Very common in Indonesia).
Hi I agree with jamesmichael...if your movie is set in a westernized country definately remove the part in brackets as it takes away from the story and change 'Ojek' to motorcycle. If it is set in Indonesia then put motorcycle in brackets after 'Ojek' as this helps clarify the location for western pRead more
Hi I agree with jamesmichael…if your movie is set in a westernized country definately remove the part in brackets as it takes away from the story and change ‘Ojek’ to motorcycle. If it is set in Indonesia then put motorcycle in brackets after ‘Ojek’ as this helps clarify the location for western producers. You can remove the word Japanese as competitor says it all. I really like your protagonist’s description as it creates endless possibilities as to where the story will go in my mind. Good luck!
See lessHeartbroken after being dumped by his longtime girlfriend, a guy?s best friends devise the perfect plan for his recovery and teach him how to sleep with as many women as humanly possible.
Hi Cameron... Think you have covered all the bases and your logline is pretty good. My only feedback is that although the title is catchy, it is alluding that your script is a horror film and this may turn away potential rom-com/comedy producers. I really like the concept and am sure it would be reaRead more
Hi Cameron… Think you have covered all the bases and your logline is pretty good. My only feedback is that although the title is catchy, it is alluding that your script is a horror film and this may turn away potential rom-com/comedy producers. I really like the concept and am sure it would be really popular with the young-mid male market. Lucky for you as this is the biggest market that everyone wants to attract. All the best, Bec
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