1. Posted: September 25, 2022In:

    A divorcé redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.

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    Hi Lotcher, What do you think of this? "An abusive jealous divorcee seeks vendetta against the private investigator he paid to spy on his ex, after discovering he has established a romantic relationship with her. I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Lotcher,

    What do you think of this?

    “An abusive jealous divorcee seeks vendetta against the private investigator he paid to spy on his ex, after discovering he has established a romantic relationship with her.

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 22, 2022In:

    KILLER BORN

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    I suggest you do what I recommended in my review of your previous loglines.

    I suggest you do what I recommended in my review of your previous loglines.

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  3. Posted: September 5, 2022In:

    An over-ambitious aspiring author must focus significant time on long neglected relationships to improve his mental wellbeing all whilst struggling to meet self-imposed deadlines for his debut novel.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Lotcher, That is great. Sounds much better. I wrote you another version anyways. "To refine his mental health amidst tensions of meeting self-imposed deadlines, an over-ambitious author must revisit his long-neglected relationships." I hope this helps. Good Luck Ben

    Hi Lotcher,

    That is great. Sounds much better.

    I wrote you another version anyways.

    “To refine his mental health amidst tensions of meeting self-imposed deadlines, an over-ambitious author must revisit his long-neglected relationships.”

    I hope this helps.
    Good Luck

    Ben

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