1. Posted: September 6, 2022In:

    When a researcher at the tv-show Wanted, happy with her second marriage family life with five weirdly wired kids, believes a suspect they’re haunting down in the tv-show might be her son, she must act to both uncover and protect him, and while doing so her life starts spiraling down.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Justine, Reading your logline, I can see something like this: "An investigative journalist's unhappy marriage starts spiraling down after she discovers the suspect she's researching might be her son and she must both uncover the truth and protect him at the same time." I hope this helps

    Hi Justine,

    Reading your logline, I can see something like this:

    “An investigative journalist’s unhappy marriage starts spiraling down after she discovers the suspect she’s researching might be her son and she must both uncover the truth and protect him at the same time.”

    I hope this helps

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  2. Posted: September 5, 2022In:

    An over-ambitious aspiring author must focus significant time on long neglected relationships to improve his mental wellbeing all whilst struggling to meet self-imposed deadlines for his debut novel.

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    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Lotcher, That is great. Sounds much better. I wrote you another version anyways. "To refine his mental health amidst tensions of meeting self-imposed deadlines, an over-ambitious author must revisit his long-neglected relationships." I hope this helps. Good Luck Ben

    Hi Lotcher,

    That is great. Sounds much better.

    I wrote you another version anyways.

    “To refine his mental health amidst tensions of meeting self-imposed deadlines, an over-ambitious author must revisit his long-neglected relationships.”

    I hope this helps.
    Good Luck

    Ben

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  3. Posted: September 5, 2022In:

    An over-ambitious aspiring author must focus significant time on long neglected relationships to improve his mental wellbeing all whilst struggling to meet self-imposed deadlines for his debut novel.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Lotcher, How about this: To help scope his ambitions and despite his efforts to meet all self-imposed deadlines, an aspiring author must take on non-fictional goals. I hope this helps

    Hi Lotcher,

    How about this:
    To help scope his ambitions and despite his efforts to meet all self-imposed deadlines, an aspiring author must take on non-fictional goals.

    I hope this helps

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