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  1. Posted: August 28, 2022In: Drama

    An American hit man must make a pact with the devil by takes an Ethiopian taxi driver hostage and kidnap a prostitute and must help her from a pimp.

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    Added an answer on August 31, 2022 at 6:13 pm

    Hi tony18, An American hitman must make a pact with the devil. Why? by taking an Ethiopian taxi driver hostage and kidnapping a prostitute. Does he achieve taking the Ethiopian taxi driver hostage and kidnaping a prostitute? Any problems/issues/conflicts/barriers stopping him? What is the devil goinRead more

    Hi tony18,

    An American hitman must make a pact with the devil. Why? by taking an Ethiopian taxi driver hostage and kidnapping a prostitute. Does he achieve taking the Ethiopian taxi driver hostage and kidnaping a prostitute? Any problems/issues/conflicts/barriers stopping him? What is the devil going to do in return?

    Have all these answers present in your logline

    I hope this helps

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2022In: Fantasy

    When his sister disappears in a magic-reliant space colony, a new wizard must break free to find her; but when he discovers they are not in space he must learn to not blindly follow, become a leader, and rally the people to take out the president before others are killed.

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    Added an answer on August 31, 2022 at 6:06 pm

    Hi MitchW, I think you are providing some unnecessary information in your logline. Stick to the core story. Below you can see what I understood you were trying to say while reading your logline. A ......(who? describe your lead character)....... who is searching for his missing sister in ..........(Read more

    Hi MitchW,
    I think you are providing some unnecessary information in your logline. Stick to the core story. Below you can see what I understood you were trying to say while reading your logline.

    A ……(who? describe your lead character)……. who is searching for his missing sister in ……….(Where? Describe the ambiance/location/place)……, discovers that innocent people are being killed by authorities for no good reason and decides to end the killings/slaughter/crimes/etc.

    I hope this helps

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  3. Posted: August 9, 2022In: Short Film

    A reputable detective finds himself caught up in a mishap of a possible alternate reality when his new murder case victim shows up alive the next day and causes him to question his sanity.

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    Replied to answer on August 27, 2022 at 9:52 pm

    Happy I could help.

    Happy I could help.

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