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giota1, What you wrote in response to my review is neither a logline nor a synopsis. I suggest you click on the "Generator" icon at the top of this page and use it to construct your logline and/or click on the "Formula" and study the content. It will help you understand the concept of a logline. WriRead more
giota1,
What you wrote in response to my review is neither a logline nor a synopsis. I suggest you click on the “Generator” icon at the top of this page and use it to construct your logline and/or click on the “Formula” and study the content. It will help you understand the concept of a logline. Write a logline and we will help modify and beautify it.
Good Luck
See lessWhen an invaluable item is stolen from the Royal Palace by pirates residing in the lawless archipelagoes, in 17th century Stockholm, a newbie officer must choose between his duties to the crown and his childhood love who was exiled to the islands many years ago.
Hi PetronellaLäckgren, Let us break down your logline into segments and see it from the readers' POV. 1- It's the 17th century, Stockholm. 2- An invaluable item is stolen from the Royal Palace by pirates residing in the lawless archipelagoes. 3- A newbie officer must choose between his duties to theRead more
Hi PetronellaLäckgren,
Let us break down your logline into segments and see it from the readers’ POV.
1- It’s the 17th century, Stockholm.
2- An invaluable item is stolen from the Royal Palace by pirates residing in the lawless archipelagoes.
3- A newbie officer must choose between his duties to the crown and his childhood love
4- The newbie officer’s childhood love was exiled to the islands many years ago
Now let us see if we can find the relation between segments of the story (if there are any).
Do you see where I’m going with this?
I think you should connect the segments by mentioning their relation. I think you should remove unnecessary info and re-write it.
I hope this helps
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A high school student moves with her mother, her grandmother and her two aunts, she discovers that they and other people around her as disguised as aliens.
Hi tony18, This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest 1- Correcting grammar/spelling 2- Use the logline "generator" and/or 3- Click on the "Formula" icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully. Good Luck
Hi tony18,
This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest
1- Correcting grammar/spelling
2- Use the logline “generator”
and/or
3- Click on the “Formula” icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully.
Good Luck
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