1. Posted: June 15, 2015In:

    A deadly fungus outbreak at a secret UN lab brings special forces soldier to defy his orders to save an old love… and human kind.

    BigTimStiles

    Okay. After brainstorming with my friend Dan: When a deadly fungus outbreak occurs, a Special Forces soldier looks to reconcile his love affair with a gorgeous scientist, and then maybe save the world.

    Okay. After brainstorming with my friend Dan:

    When a deadly fungus outbreak occurs, a Special Forces soldier looks to reconcile his love affair with a gorgeous scientist, and then maybe save the world.

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  2. Posted: June 15, 2015In:

    When a bullied kid finds a terrifying but badly wounded alien, he rallies his family and friends to help get it back to it's spaceship.

    BigTimStiles

    Okay... I thought adding "terrifying" would differentiate that this wasn't the lovable E.T. we all love. So, here's my reworking: After being nursed back to health by a school boy, a wounded alien is forced to reassess it?s plans to invade the planet.

    Okay… I thought adding “terrifying” would differentiate that this wasn’t the lovable E.T. we all love.

    So, here’s my reworking:

    After being nursed back to health by a school boy, a wounded alien is forced to reassess it?s plans to invade the planet.

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  3. Posted: June 15, 2015In:

    When a frustrated public servant is fired from his meaningless job, he decides to become a masked vigilante, protecting his neighbourhood.

    BigTimStiles

    Okay... here's my next reworking: After witnessing how easily the system let?s down someone he loves, a frustrated social worker leaves his job and becomes a masked vigilante.

    Okay… here’s my next reworking:

    After witnessing how easily the system let?s down someone he loves, a frustrated social worker leaves his job and becomes a masked vigilante.

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