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  1. Posted: June 10, 2017In: Horror

    When a hardcore gamer learns the true nature of an horrific childhood experience, he must face the little black evil that tormented him as a child again.

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on June 11, 2017 at 11:20 am

    I'm hiding the ball. I know that. I know the description is vague and yes, there is a way for me to just come out and say it. But, I can't do it here. This project I've been working on for years now has caused me no end of heartache and despair. And I don't planning on losing it now because someoneRead more

    I’m hiding the ball. I know that. I know the description is vague and yes, there is a way for me to just come out and say it. But, I can’t do it here. This project I’ve been working on for years now has caused me no end of heartache and despair. And I don’t planning on losing it now because someone steals my idea, or even a small piece of it.

    The core of my story is solid as a rock. It’s the inciting incident that’s got me spinning. I have about 30 different stories that the core story can plug into but been struggling to decide which is the best.

    Came to the conclusion that my logline is shaky and need to sort it out before starting to write again. The DNA is screwy. So, I figure if I can fix it I can finish this story. And get onto the others.

    Just want to say thank you so much for your help. You have no idea how much I appreciate it. I have no one to talk to about these things. And find that you guys here are amazing to keeping writers on the straight and narrow.

    THANK YOU!

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  2. Posted: June 10, 2017In: Horror

    A hardcore gamer learns from mysterious rebels about the true nature of his horrific childhood and his role in the formation of a new age of enlightenment.

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on June 10, 2017 at 2:28 pm

    Thanks for the help. I really appreciate it, whoever you are :) His goal is to complete the transformation that was initiated in childhood. He did not complete the transformation due to the strange nature of the experience and the UNSPEAKABLE FEAR that accompanied it.

    Thanks for the help. I really appreciate it, whoever you are 🙂

    His goal is to complete the transformation that was initiated in childhood. He did not complete the transformation due to the strange nature of the experience and the UNSPEAKABLE FEAR that accompanied it.

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