1. Posted: June 17, 2017In:

    A writer suffering from a MYSTERIOUS ILLNESS must return to his childhood home to reenact the traumatic events that alleviate his symptoms.

    Billy14 Samurai

    Thanks for everything guys. I figured out my logline. There's also no point in me posting it here as the story is South Africa specific and only a South African director would go for it. You helped me figure that out. So that's me done with this logline. I'll be back with something new if my movie eRead more

    Thanks for everything guys. I figured out my logline. There’s also no point in me posting it here as the story is South Africa specific and only a South African director would go for it.

    You helped me figure that out.

    So that’s me done with this logline. I’ll be back with something new if my movie ever gets made.

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  2. Posted: June 16, 2017In:

    When his medication stops working, a divorced writer must relive the inception of his MYSTERIOUS ILLNESS to remember how he stopped it as a child. (26)

    Billy14 Samurai

    Think of Stephen King's IT. They stopped Pennywise and then suppressed the memory only to have Pennywise return and face IT all over again. My story has a similar element. And it is a horror.

    Think of Stephen King’s IT. They stopped Pennywise and then suppressed the memory only to have Pennywise return and face IT all over again.

    My story has a similar element. And it is a horror.

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  3. Posted: June 16, 2017In:

    When his medication stops working, a divorced writer must relive the inception of his MYSTERIOUS ILLNESS to remember how he stopped it as a child. (26)

    Billy14 Samurai

    Gotcha. I'll get rid of it. No problem. I know the pros hate flashbacks. I can work around that but there is one flashback that I can't get rid of, the one related to the MC's illness origin. Please advise. And thank you!

    Gotcha. I’ll get rid of it. No problem.

    I know the pros hate flashbacks. I can work around that but there is one flashback that I can’t get rid of, the one related to the MC’s illness origin.

    Please advise. And thank you!

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